Check out the story below to see how the people at the Central PA ComicCon would have written Redemption!
(start the flashback)
It was a warm summer day, and it seemed to Jae that nothing could go wrong. Clearly, he was mistaken. Suddenly, he heard the sound of a mournful train whistle, which was odd, as there were no train tracks nearby.
Crap! Not again!
A glittering black armored locomotive was twisting through the sky, the small ebony worm slithering closer to the terrified figure of Jae, growing larger as it approached.